Friday, October 9, 2015

#SaturdayScenes The Beginning

I've decided to share the entirety of my novelette The Beginning for the next few #SaturdayScenes in honor of NaNoWriMo.

Here's the blurb:

The Beginning

For every step in the right direction,
There’s one that lingers in the dark.
Forgive the stability of my expression,
But the truth stands still inside the spark.
For what you know cannot be true,
There’s a different path in sight.
Don’t worry, history doesn’t blame you,
It just wants to set the tale right.
The wolf was real, the girl a sham,
Real humanity in the village was kept.
The hunger inside is quite grand,
So you better watch your step.

The Beginning is a novelette for the Guarding the Vila series. It takes place before Red. It is approx. 10k words and is a short-story.






Enjoy!

*
And this warning take, I beg;

Not every wolf runs on four legs.

The smooth tongue of a smooth-skinned creature

May mask a rough and wolfish nature.

These quiet types for all their charm,

Can be the cause of the worse harm.

-Charles Perrault; Little Red Riding Hood

France, Fall of 1697

*

The dew had yet to be disturbed and the leaves lit the ground on fire with their 

color. The wooden cabins lay laced with mist, hardly visible from my window, while they 

sat in the distance. I should have been soaking up the beauty, loving the morning before 

the winter turned it cold, but Mama had woken me too early after her long trip from 

Grandmere's, causing my mood to turn fouler with each passing breath. No amount of 

beauty, or threat of its extinction, could soften the sour look I gave the dawn.

"Scarlett," she called. "Wake up! Grandmere is sick and cannot get out of bed. 

The wolves are said to roam this time of year, so I need you to get up so you can 

go and light the fires for her tonight. She is too weak to do them herself and I 

must go to town and fetch your sister to help take care of her."

I mumbled sleepily and rolled over, trying to ignore the urgency in her voice.

"Girl, wake up!"

She shook me heavily as I tried to burrow deeper under my covers, when 

suddenly she tore them off completely. She scowled, tapping her foot impatiently, as I 

crawled begrudgingly from my bed to get dressed. I did not want to be up and I did not 

care to walk the distance to Grandmere's. This could wait, I was certain, but if I did not 

do as I was asked, I would be left no coin for food, and Mama's temper would flare 

when she returned. It seemed far better, for now, to appease her. She quickly kissed my 

head as she pulled on her cape.

"You know what you must do?" 

I rolled my eyes with my back still turned towards her. 

"Yes, Mama. Light the fires at Grandmere's." I could hear the rustle of her skirts 

moving away from me.

"And you must do it before dark. Do not stray, Scarlett. I'm trusting you."

Before I could say more she was out the door and on her way to the town a half-
day’s walk north. I couldn't help grumbling, cursing at my unfortunate luck, as the chill of 

the floor crept through my bare feet. I should have been married off long ago, released 

from being a burden on my family and from having their burden on me. But at twenty I 

was still living at home, taking care of Mama as if I were an old maid. It was customary 

for fathers to pick a future husband to take care of his daughter as soon as she was of 

age. My father had done all of this, choosing a boy about my age named Jacques. He 

was brave and eager to become the lead hunter's apprentice, convincing father of his 

worth even though he came from humble beginnings. My father always called him a 

wolf in sheep's clothing, insisting he was more predator than goat herder. All had been 

set until my betrothed died at the age of sixteen, weeks short of when we would have 

been wed, alongside my father.

Papa had taken him on an early hunting trip, training him. They did not stand a 

chance. The wolves tore them apart to the point that they were barely recognizable. The 

only indicator that it was them were the pieces of clothing strewn on the ground and the 

emblem embedded in my father's chewed fist, declaring him the lead hunter of our 

village. Since his death, Mama had refused to give me away and her fear of the wolves 

had been palpable. The fires were key to keeping the beasts at bay, but as I stood in 

the morning light, I could not bring myself to head into the woods towards the cabin. I 

did have a little time until it would be absolutely necessary to leave in order to be there 

before dark. I turned my steps towards the baker's cabin, the forest drifting away at my 

back.

The smell of freshly baked bread and hot iron filled the air. The earliest risers 

were always the baker and the blacksmith. I loved the way the morning swirled with the 

scent, both metallic and warm. The baker ran her shop out of her small cabin, tucked 

deep into the middle of our village, a pitched lean-to in front. The outside was lined with 

shelving and tables, all holding the goods she baked to sell. Thankfully, I had a few 

coins to fill my hunger with since the smells of her wares were driving my stomach to 

flips.

A crowd of villagers were pulled tightly together by the time I reached the shop, 

requiring me to push my way through to the front. A week ago I had come, craving the 

taste of scones, and just as I had arrived, a traveler snatched the last one from the shelf 

greedily. I knew I needed to be quick, so I would not be cheated again. I none-too-gently 

elbowed a man in a graying outfit, quickly taking his surprise as an advantage to step in 

front of him. I saw his glare from the corner of my eye, words of protest hanging on his 

lips. He looked to the hood at my back, recognizing me instantly.

"Red! You should try to watch your elbows. It's not very ladylike to be shoving 

men around." 

He gave me a wink, a smile spreading across his face. Claude was the 

handsome, carefree boy in our village, whose looks alone would make even the most 

proper lady swoon. His golden hair only haloed his charm and his eyes of brun 

constantly danced with mischief. He made every girl smile and would have no trouble 

finding a bride... except that he was completely in love with me. He had asked my 

Mama numerous times for my hand, but every time, she declined. We, of course, had 

our fun, but I couldn't imagine marrying a butcher's boy, the stench of death burned into 

his hands. I was a hunter's daughter and to marry outside of my class was beneath me. 

My father had always promised me a hunter and even in his absence I would accept no 

less.

I turned away from Claude, unconcerned with his teasing, and grabbed for the 

last raspberry scone, snatching it from underneath the hand of a battered old man. He 

looked pitiful, urging me with his eyes to give up the scone I had taken. I refused, 

shrugging my shoulders, pointing instead to a pie that was still waiting to be taken from 

the shelf. He shook his head in disgust at my suggestion. I did not feel guilty as I bit into 

the gooey raspberry filling, the flavors comforting my decision to be harsh. All acts were 

fair when dealing with the baker's delicious goods. The old man would just have to 

learn, as I had, to be quicker next time.

I left my coin in the hands of the baker's daughter then shuffled my way out of the 

crowd, satisfied with my haul. Claude was right on my heels, obnoxiously digging into a 

scone of his own. When we were far enough away to be simply a memory to the crowd, 

the scones licked clean from our fingers, he swooped me up by the waist, planting a 

sugar-filled kiss on my lips with force. I pushed at his arms to let me go and he did, 

dropping me lightly to my toes. I grabbed his hand and ran towards a small alley 

between two stables, hidden away from prying eyes.

"Claude! That was not discreet! I thought we agreed it wouldn't be proper, kissing 

in the streets. What if someone saw? My reputation would be ruined, you 

wretched boy!

I slapped at his chest but he just laughed, the contagious sound thrumming through my 

fingers.

"No one saw us, darling girl. You know I would be ashamed if I ended up the 

cause of your fallen honor. I would never be so rash!" He gently brushed my 

cheek. "You are as precious as a rose in bloom." Stepping back, he looked 

around in delight. "But behold! We are alone. So. Where were we?"

He grabbed me by the waist, sweeping me up into another kiss. This time I 

returned it, consumed by his urgency. He tasted of jam and warm bread, and for a 

moment it didn't matter who we were. We could have been anyone and the future laid 

out before us. All that mattered was that it felt right. That moment, however sweet, just 

as the roses were, faded quickly. He returned me to my feet, that I carefully shuffled 

trying to regain my balance. I adjusted my skirts and cape back to their proper position.

"What is the meaning of all of the commotion this morning? There are so many 

people about so early," I said. 

"The men are going on their hunt tomorrow for the wolves, so the town is 

throwing a festival for their safe return. There'll be plenty of food and drink today, 

ma cherie! It's a celebration! One that you do not want to miss, dear lady."

He slurred his words in exaggerated excitement and I couldn't help the grin that 

came to my face. In my anger at Mama I had completely forgotten the day. I loved the 

festivities before a hunt. There was no better place to be in all of France when our 

village was celebrating the safe return of our men. Claude's enthusiasm only spurred on 

my own. The town would be so alive today, whereas tomorrow there would be nothing 

but drowning amounts of fear—terror that our loved ones may not return. I had a few 

hours until it would be absolutely necessary that I leave and this would be a pity to miss. 

I grabbed Claude's hand and started dragging him towards the pub. He played along, 

pretending that my strength overwhelmed his own.

"Where are you taking me, my rose?" He said with feigned concern.

I just winked and we ran through the streets, laughing.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015

It's Never Too Late

To Say Thank You <3

Today, my dear friends, is for you. I want to simply say thank you.

Thank you for your time, reading the stupid, but needed, things that I post.

Thank you for including me in your circles, your jokes, your advice. 

Thank you for taking moments out of your days to answer my questions, commenting or sharing, and making things seem like they matter in a world that is usually too busy to notice.

Thank you for helping me step out of my comfort zone.

Thank you for helping me. Period. Even though you may not know you're doing it, have done it, or will do it in the future, know that you are, will or have. 

Thank you for being real. For showing me your success, for sharing your trials, for giving more than I'm sure you feel you should, to those of us who want to know.

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

<3 JB